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Old 08-04-2007, 03:38 PM
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Hello!
My scanner is not well.. So I have to take a photo... I will post a better image when I have a scanner.





I donīt know why but, with photo, the colors are not right! (it seems to be a little purple!)
I am not very satisfected with this draw because I think that the baby is not similar with the baby on the photo that I draw!!
But whatever.. I did my best and I know that it will be better on the next time..
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Old 08-04-2007, 08:56 PM
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heyy comment please! I need some suggestions!!
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Old 08-04-2007, 09:01 PM
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Woops sorry, been responding in all topics today and forgetting yours

You're calling your photo a little purple... I call it definitely purple Which is very very unfortunate because I think the original's looking really good The kid's looking pretty funny Although I do feel like it's kind of a mixture between a child's face and an adult's. I think the cause's the absence of typical childlike features in your drawing. Perhaps you could add some more details in the face to make it look more like a child?
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Old 08-04-2007, 09:01 PM
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ok
Good comments - the baby is adorable! I love the whole idea of this pic it's so cute

Advice - I'd say give the hair more shading, it's good but still a bit edgy, also give the baby's mouth lines a little lighter shading as it looks a little too dark. The fingers on our viewers left are a little too pudgy and the arm on our right is a little too thin at the top.

Other than that I think it's adorable and I like it
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Old 08-04-2007, 09:12 PM
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Hi!
Thank you for the suggestions!!Chart I also think that the baby seems to be an adult... But I tried and I canīt because I didnīt so much details in face because itīs a baby... I will try to repair my scanner and after I show the draw again... It is not purple in reality!! I will try hard to draw a more baby face~...
Taryth I also think that hair is not so good... I can draw better long hair!
And the fingers and the hands are the most difficult part to me! I tried... But itīs horrible!
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Old 08-05-2007, 05:34 PM
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Hey!
I did a new draw about a little girl that I know named Diana.
I really donīt like the eyesk, but now I can do nothing about that... I also donīt finish the mouse...
Please comment... i need suggestions
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Old 08-05-2007, 07:45 PM
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i personally think there's something wrong with her chin, her mouth isn't positioned right, its too low. the reason for you not liking the eyes is probably that her right eye (our left!) is too small, compared with the other and for her face. children have quite big eyes! hope this'll help you a bit. am very fond of your composition, the adding of the flower, butterfly and her name.
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Old 08-05-2007, 07:54 PM
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hey Marit!
Thank you for your comment!
I am just in beggining..., I am trying hard to be better!
I know that this draw has some things wrong, but when I look I can see the girl... Itīs similar!
I think that the better thing on this draw is the hair... It looks like Dianaīs hair!
Yes... the right eye is most small that the left...
Ok... I promisse that the next will be better!
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Old 08-06-2007, 01:42 PM
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Hello
I am doing this picture that I found in a magazine:







Is it a good image??
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It'a a beautiful picture, but a little bit too dark I think...
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