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I wrote a poem in dedication to everyone at zindy zone, the words are adressed to each and everyone of you, i love it here.
here goes... Precious in creation, Beautiful to my eyes, You are hope for this generation, surrounded by others lies. Pure at heart, Pleasure to my ears, You speak through your art, success for you nears. Blessed with talent, Sensitive to my touch, I believe you're heaven sent, Your love is just too much. Special like gold, heavenly to my senses, The world treats you so cold, My whole heart tenses. Radiant like angels, Soft to my caress, Your happiness sells, I will never love you any less....
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its funny how money changes situation, misscommunication leads to complication, my emancipation dont fit ur equation, i was on the humble u on every station, sum wan\' play allayna like she dumb... |
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Beautiful
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Yay! Im the first to tell you, that poem is soo good!! lol its sweet
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okay 2nd
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yeah! really good!
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lol! thank you innocent angel!! thats means a lot to me!
sm, thank you the most, for helping me with the poem, and for your kind words, i really appreciate it!
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and thank you jean, i just noticed your post
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aww that's so beautiful
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thank you maii
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ohh how sweet! i luv poetry too!
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