Read this!! no compliments just tell me what u think.

[lilbabygoth]

It was pain
and I was heartbroken
and the pain that dwelled inside wouldn’t subside
and all the anguish I’ve built up over the years was spilled away in a single day
and the sadness that drowned me was wash away with those tears
and it was all because of you
and you screamed at me
and you threatened me
and you hated me
and I hated you
and I despised you
and you made me sick
and you hurt me so much
and I can never be healed
and my life will never be the same
and I will die hating you
and I will die despising you
and I will die with you making me sick even in my grave
but maybe I will still love you.

[Nas-T]

wowie...

[lilbabygoth]

hey thanx um well i think im gonna post some more poems actually this one was just an assignment i think i spelled that right..if not oh well but ya like i said just read them and tell me what you thnk thanx.

[Yousteen]

interesting...

[Maiii]

I like it very much! Anger yay

[lilbabygoth]

Thanx all!!!

[Azn_baby]

niiiiiiiiiice! just for me !

[Ramona]

i like it too!!

[DeGrawgirl]

The and kind of kills the whole thing. It doesn't sound right, I think if you take it out it would sound much better.