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Old 04-24-2005, 05:40 PM
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Here is one of my drawings.
I tryed to use more shading as someone suggested me.


and the photo


This should be Adriana Lima on the drawing. Something is not right on the drawing but I don't know what.

Please help.
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Old 04-24-2005, 05:42 PM
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Wow very good resemblance, good shadowing. I think you made her right cheek (our left) to wide. I like the skecthy way of your drawing. I love that myself very much. but if you want to become more realistic in your drawings, try to shade smoother
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Old 04-24-2005, 05:45 PM
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Looks really good
I like the expression of your draw it`s a really beautiful picture
Who is it actually?
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Old 04-24-2005, 05:48 PM
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Your drawing is very good, you are not afraid to go dark, which is great.
To me it looks like her, but her nose is perhaps a little bigger on the reference and the lips as well. Maybe make the area around the eyes slightly darker and I am sure it will look more like her.
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Old 04-24-2005, 05:55 PM
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it realy looks good- i like it!

But I´m agree with luna, if you want to draw more realistic (of course you don´t have to - everyone has individual style...)
you should draw smoother, especially the hair.
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Old 04-24-2005, 08:21 PM
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it realy looks good- i like it!

But I´m agree with luna, if you want to draw more realistic (of course you don´t have to - everyone has individual style...)
you should draw smoother, especially the hair.
what does draw smoother means?

I looked in dictionary but I haven't found the meaning of it?
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Old 04-24-2005, 11:33 PM
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my english isn´t the best, but i will try to explain:

ice is smooth; a mirror is smooth

drawing smooth means, that you draw just a few lines for a shape and shading smooth means that you can´t see any "boarderlines" between the shadow areas.

hope I was able to help you - if not: I´m sure the others are better in explaining words.
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Old 04-25-2005, 06:26 AM
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my english isn´t the best, but i will try to explain:

ice is smooth; a mirror is smooth

drawing smooth means, that you draw just a few lines for a shape and shading smooth means that you can´t see any "boarderlines" between the shadow areas.

hope I was able to help you - if not: I´m sure the others are better in explaining words.

What we see here is a beautiful drawing of Miss Lima.
The person who made this has a sketchy style.. Thats not smooth ( you can see you pencil-strikes etc. ).
When a person has a smooth style, this person will try to make the drawing exactly like the picture ( no outlines, smudging etc. ).
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It looks really beautiful The cheekbone is just the slightest, teeniest bit off, but the drawing looks amazing
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Old 04-25-2005, 06:17 PM
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hey - please don´t missunderstand me. I love his drawing in his style and I don´t want to force him to draw a special style.
would be very boring when everybody would have the same style...[/b][/i]
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