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Old 07-08-2004, 10:46 PM
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Default A couple or my drawings I want Critiqued

I ask for your honest critiques on these drawings..please don't be mean and if you want to be mean word it nicely cuz I have seen some people be dickheads about other's works on here before. When you put extensive time and effort into something like drawing no one deserves to be put down. Thanks
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Old 07-08-2004, 10:55 PM
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and no I am not just fishing for compliments. I think they are decent drawings but I know for a fact there are flaws. I would really like to get zindy's take on them.
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Old 07-08-2004, 11:11 PM
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Wow, those are really nice. I particularly like the last one for some strange reason...I think it's the energy that is expressed. I also like the one of Christina Aguilera. The only thing that didn't seem fitting was her hand. It seems a bit small. Otherwise, her face was drawn beautifully.
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Old 07-09-2004, 12:52 AM
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I really like your style. So clean.

You asked for criticism , so some small points:

The Christina one, the irisses look oval to me, they're usually round at that angle, and the thumb looks a bit odd. Too much cylinder shaped in the middle part I guess.

Johnny Depp: eyes again. The white is too bright, and maybe too flat (but that kind of suits your style). Also, they seem to be pointed in different directions, one higher than the other.

No nitpicking on the last two , nice job on the goggles, and that last one is just brilliant.
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Old 07-09-2004, 01:26 AM
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I do agree with the eyes...I actually just read a tutorial that said that eyes aren't as white as we all think they are. Yes now that you point that out on the christina one I see it too. I hate hands too, haven't had that much experience with them. I will have to practice more on the hands.
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