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Old 10-03-2010, 12:51 PM
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[/IMG]Hello guys, I am new to the forums and have been drawing for almost 2 years. These are my very old drawings, I hope to get some feedback on what I did wrong and how I can improve. thanks heaps!

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Old 10-03-2010, 02:06 PM
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Hi Mila
My first thought when seeing your baby drawing was to give you a Kleenex to smooth out the pencil strokes a bit. I really think you would love it. Basically you wrap it around your finger and gently rub on the surface. You will be amazed at how soft you can get it to look. The reason I suggest this is mainly because it's a baby you are drawing and they are so soft and smooth.
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Proportions look good. Focus more on tonal balance. Like the center is darker than the top. Try to do something with background to make your works stronger.
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I agree with Zindy and Cold_Shiva. and try to work on light and shadow keep it up.
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