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Old 06-13-2009, 03:43 AM
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Default A sketch of a singer

please comment ok
I used a charcoal pencil & ordinary pencil for drawing
the pic is for comparison sake & for comments
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I don't think it's good enough maybe the eyes are not bad though





Here's another sketch



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Old 06-15-2009, 09:18 AM
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Not bad at all, very nice actually in my oppinion I like the drawing of the girl with the dove the most, it would fit very nice in a childrens book imo. As to the portrait of the singer, nicely done. I see you din't stick to the reverance picture, very brave and also very nice And... Welcome to the forum
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Thank you so much dear for your comment & I agree about the children book. I have another post about other sketches if you wanna check them out.
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Welcome to the forum
I can see you chose to change the angle of his face. The eyes look nice. I would suggest shading more and going darker, it will really make your drawing stand out and have depth
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