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#1
07-28-2005, 06:16 PM
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NEW DRAWING PAGE FIVE (MY FIRST charcoaL.
  Comments, Please  Tell me ways to improve! 
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Last edited by Pia : 03-23-2006 at 09:12 PM. 
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#2
07-28-2005, 07:19 PM
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Hi,
i like your drawings. : ) The second is Jay-Z, isn't it? But the first, is it a celebrity? Perhaps you could make it more detailled...for example the eyes. But one question, which pencil-grades (right word?( : ) did you use for these ones?
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#3
07-28-2005, 07:35 PM
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they're both really good. the first one is mariah carey and the second is jay-z. they are very recognizable.
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07-28-2005, 07:35 PM
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they're both really good. the first one is mariah carey and the second is jay-z. they are very recognizable.
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#5
07-28-2005, 08:11 PM
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I reconized Mariah Carey! your shading is very smooth...just keep practicing to get better.. keep your style, witch I think it's nice. i'd give you some advices but you know i'm still learning myself!
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07-28-2005, 08:48 PM
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Hi Pia
I really love the first one 
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07-28-2005, 09:33 PM
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thanks u guys!
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07-28-2005, 09:35 PM
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#9
07-28-2005, 10:39 PM
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I think the nose's outline should be drawn lighter... noses looks too bat because of that outline. The mariah carey is good. The other one i dont know whjo he is.
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#10
07-29-2005, 04:04 AM
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theyre both recognisable! i like the way you did the hair on mariah! its not bad, just a diff. style!
the only things i would say, is work much more on the eyes b/c they can be the main part in some portraits. also, try and reduce the number of hard drawn lines in your drawng b/c they tend to stand out and look out of place (esp. around the nose as Emmy said).
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