Need help!

[Zindy]

Hi Everyone,

I really need your help.
Is any of you Justin Timberlake fans or familiar with his "look"?
The drawing I did of Justin isn't quite good, there's something wrong and I don't know what it is. If any of you could please tell me what you think and maybe suggestions for changes. It would mean a lot!
http://zindy.zone.dk/images/drawings/stars/justin_timberlake.jpg

[Bo]

Hi Zindy

Love the drawing ... however I know what you mean - I think if you toned down his lips to the same colour/shade as his face then that would make a difference and also, maybe making his eyebrows a bit more bushy and more manly. Hope this helps without sounding really negative!! :oops:

[Zindy]

Thanks and please be rough, otherwise I wouldn't know what's wrong ;)
I think you are right about the eyebrows I'll try and correct it right away. Maybe his mouth is too red to be realistic, it's not that manly either. Thanks so far :)

[Zindy]

Here's the new version, is it better?
http://zindy.zone.dk/images/drawings/stars/justin_timberlake_v2.jpg
I think I looks a little more like Justin now.. I took your advice Bo and made his lips less red and bigger eyebrows. Thanks :)

[Hexe]

Itīs better; looks great :D The only thing that looks a little bit strange is the hair line/ his forehead...

[Hexe]

Itīs better; looks great :D The only thing that looks a little bit strange is the hair line/ his forehead

sorry, double post..... :roll:

[Bo]

Cool - looking good!!! However, there is one thing that does keep distracting me - the eye lashes on the right eye ... maybe make them a little less prominent?? Other than that I think it looks fantastic!! :D

[cricket]

I think Hexe's right, that it has something to do with the hair line, or the forehead...But other than that its good! :D

[dirrty_raindreamer]

one thing i can think of is justin has very distigtive eyebrows i dont know if thats it but justins eyebrows are usually different then you have made them...but either way i love the drawing

[Zindy]

Thanks for the comments, I think you are right - it's something with his forehead, I think it's too big.. anyway, I'm not going to make more changes, I'll probably just mess it up :/

I have another problem with a drawing of Amy Lee that I hope you can help me with. For some reason she looks "wrong".
http://zindy.zone.dk/images/amyoriginal.jpg
http://zindy.zone.dk/images/amydrawing.jpg

She looks chubby on my drawing and something's wrong with her eyes and mouth.. Maybe there's something with the shape of her head too?
Can you help me?

Hmm, some people I just can't draw :ī(

[Hexe]

It looks great! There are only some LITTLE mistakes.
The nose is a LITTLE bit too small, also the chin,the line at/under the left cheek is a little bit wrong.
Something with the mouth is a little bit wrong, I think you have to put more shadow between the lips.
You also could add a little bit more eyeshadow to her eyes, and make her hair darker and a little bit more full. :wink:

[cricket]

I think that maybe the lips are not wide enough, like width wise in your drawing. And maybe her cheeks or jaw are a little too chubby, but if you make her lips wider, it might make her look less pudgy. Her eyes look pretty perfect to me. its really a beautiful drawing. I like it alot! :D

[sarah]

i like your drawing . but i also think the nose is a little bit to small and there/s something wrong with the mouth..

[Eva]

it already looks graet, but I think the upper lip must be a bit fuller/bigger. and i would make the face a bit (only a bit!) slimmer. the cheaks look like the ones of a baby doll.
(sorry, for being rude, i still love your drawing!)

[inęs santos]

Hexe you took the worlds out of my mouth!!!!

[xanderuk]

It is really good!
The only tiny alterations you might need to make have already been mentioned.
I'd love to be able to draw hair like that (its what I'm practicing at the moment...unsuccessfully so far lol)

[Zindy]

Thanks for your advice everyone. I've decided to throw out the drawing - it just look ...wrong! Maybe my next attempt drawing her will be better.

[Elli]

Hey hey, if you donīt like it, you can give it to me, because I love it! :wink:

[Doodler]

I love Amy Lee, but the picture you drew seems that her jaw is too big, and her lips are a little small. :? Otherwise you are a great drawer. :D

[pnnkpaanther]

It looks like a younger version of her....... mabey make her look a little more grown up, sorry not to be rude.